
Editing is hard but at least my Beta Reader leaves such enjoyable comments in between pointing out stuff I can fix (as I recall I did the same thing to her book last year…scores of comments that were just “OH MY GOD” over and over)

Editing is hard but at least my Beta Reader leaves such enjoyable comments in between pointing out stuff I can fix (as I recall I did the same thing to her book last year…scores of comments that were just “OH MY GOD” over and over)
No one really wanted 1,500 words of Lyn and Hector and Sacaen wedding traditions but I don’t care.
Headcanon heavy and also super embarrassing.
Lyn hadn’t had much time to get used to Lycian traditions,
but even so she could tell a marked difference between Ostia and Caelin. Hector
was not so unusual a nobleman as she had thought at first, but a product of his
people. The Ostians were frank and open, curious about her, and somehow more
respectful than even her own people had been.
In Caelin her resemblance to her mother had been remarked
upon, but there was always a disconnect. People couldn’t seem to see past the
darker shade of her skin, the accent that marred her Elibean common, her very
un-Lycian views about nobility.
In Ostia, opinions were more divided, and strongly so. Those
who had supported Uther, and who tentatively put their support behind Hector,
viewed her as a strong warrior first, a tie to another territory second, and a
Sacaen third. Those who had opposed Uther were even more strongly set against
his brother, and paid her little consideration at all – except to insult her
mixed-parentage.
That didn’t bother her. She had heard much the same from
Marquis Araphen, and many others along the way. Those words mattered scant more
than the twittering of the birds outside the windows, especially in light of
other current events.
Ostia had gained two Marquis in far too short a time, and
there was unrest both from within and without. Hector’s ascension ceremony had
been arranged with all possible haste, and he was Marquis Ostia before his
wounds had even begun to heal. Now her wedding was being arranged with the same
speed. After all, the Marquis needed a wife, and Ostia needed an heir.
The preparations were less ostentatious than those for the
few weddings she had seen in Lycia, but still nothing like what she thought her wedding would be like, back
when she was only Lyn of the Lorca. That wasn’t who she was any longer. Now she
was Lady Lyndis, soon to be Lady Ostia, and so she tried to accept it with
dignity.
Hector, however, knew her better.
He stopped her on her way through the garden. “Let’s go for
a ride in the park,” he said. It was short, as usual, without preamble. Even
being Marquis didn’t encourage him to speak any more politely.
Lyn raised her eyebrows. “Don’t you have meetings today?” A
fair question. It seemed Hector had meetings every day, in some cases assuaging
fears and in others offering not-at-all veiled threats. Soon enough Lyn would
be joining him, but not until after the wedding.
Hector shrugged. “They’ll wait. The horses are already
saddled.”
“Well, someone’s confident today hm? Do you think you’ll be
able to stay in the saddle this time?”
“If I don’t, it’s only because my teacher has been slacking.”
Hector reached forward and grabbed her hand. “Let’s go, Lyn! Pox on the nobles,
we ought to be allowed a day to ourselves now and then.” When he began tugging
her in the direction of the stables, Lyn didn’t protest at all.
*
The park was where Lyn went whenever she was feeling
homesick. It was nothing at all like Sacae, where the grass rolled on until it
touched the sky, but it was still better than the crowded streets of Ostia, and
the heavily fortified military garrison that served as its castle. The park was
behind the castle, just outside the walls. Part meadow and part woods, it meant
to be hunted on and ridden through by the Marquis and his family. Neither Uther
nor Hector had hunted there with any regularity, so it had begun to take on a
slightly wild aspect. Not truly wild, but less maintained than the gardens or
the flawless expanse of lawn within the walls, it was the only place in the
whole city that seemed familiar to her.
Hector did manage to keep his seat, so Lyn had to find
another way to tease him. Not that it was hard. “Now that you can manage one of
these, we’ll have to visit Sacae sometime so I can put you on real horse.”
He didn’t take the bait.
“I’d like that….to visit Sacae with you sometime,” he said. So
serious, so awkward, so unlike Hector. Lyn had only known him to talk like that
a few times, and hearing him do it now worried her.
“Is everything alright?” she asked, hands tightening
automatically on the reins. Her horse tossed its head, irritated by the sudden
tension, and she forced herself to relax, to breath, to wait for Hector to
explain himself.
“I have something for you, and I didn’t want to give it to
you in front of the jackal pack,” he said. He nudged his horse closer to hers, close
enough that she could feel the fabric of his trousers rubbing against her leg.
From his pocket, he pulled two velvet pouches, one red and one blue. He handed
the red one to her.
“Not both?” she asked, teasing again.
This time he did smile. “Greedy! This one’s mine. Open it.”
She poured the contents of the bag out into her palm. A thin
silver chain, glinting in the sunlight. Directly in the middle were two larger,
diamond-shaped links, locked together. The symbol worn by wives all over the
Sacaen plains. Lyn looked over at him, speechless.
Hector held up his own necklace – gold instead of silver,
thicker than her own, the two intersecting shapes on his were circles, not diamonds.
“I know it’s usually a ring, but there’s already wedding rings in my family. I
thought a necklace would do just as well.”
“How did you know?”
“I bullied Guy into telling me. Here.” He leaned forward and
took the necklace from her hand, undoing the clasp and fastening it around her
neck. The large, battle-scarred hands that had helped kill a dragon were
delicate as lace against her throat.
There was nothing mocking or serious to say in a moment like
this. She only reached over and did the same for him. The golden chain stood
out against the dark blue of his tunic, bringing a little decoration to his
usually plain style. It fit, as if it had always belonged there, and had only
now found its way home.
She understood the ride, now. A Sacaen wedding was always
performed under open air, and a Sacaen engagement was usually proceeded by a
long ride. Not easy to do here in populous Ostia but, as he so often did,
Hector still managed to do and say the right thing at the right time.
“There’s words too, I know. I didn’t forget. Well….I did
forget, but I’ll do it anyway.”
Lyn could only smile as he did his best to say the marriage
vows she grew up hearing. “Your accent is terrible,” she said when he was done.
But she repeated the words after him, glad to have a chance to speak her own
language again, even gladder for a chance to say words she didn’t think she
ever would, words that, in a language full of grace and beauty, still seemed to
stand out.
Hector gazed back at her, smiling slightly, eyes softened
with an expression of amused affection that he only shared with her. “When your
hand is clasped in mine, I’m stronger,” he said, repeating the first line in
the common tongue. He held out his hand.
Lyn took it, and took up the verse where he left off. “When
your words join mine, I’m wiser.”
“When your steps match mine, I’m braver,” he said.
“So I’ll ride beside you, if you’ll have me,” Lyn said.
Then Hector joined her, as if they planned it, and they
spoke the remaining lines together. “I’ll ride beside you, until the rivers run
dry, until the moon swallows the sun, until the stars fall from the sky like
rain. Not until then will our paths diverge.”
They both allowed a natural silence to form after the words,
a moment to think about what they had said and what they had learned.
Hector spoke first. “It sounds better in Sacaen.”
“What doesn’t?”
There was still an awkwardness in the way he held himself
and the way he spoke. There was more that Hector wanted to say, Lyn knew, but
he didn’t know how to say it. He didn’t need to say it. She had come a long way
from thinking he was just some brute with an axe.
They both spoke more through actions than words, so Lyn
leaned forward and showed him what she thought. When she broke the kiss, it was
with the satisfaction of seeing a dazed look on his face – another expression
that only she got to see.
“I’ll race you back to the castle,” she said, and brought
her horse around to face the way that they had come.
Hector grinned, the same grin he had worn in sparring
matches and in battles, in every competition they’d ever had. “I hope you’re
ready to lose, because I’ve been taught by the best.”
“We’ll see!”
Both horses took off in a thunder of hooves.
Later, when they reached the castle gate, neither Lyn nor Hector felt it
necessary to mention that they’d arrived at the same time.
“Miss Florina!”
Florina looked up from where she was repairing a gash in her
saddle with quick, even stitches. Ninian was walking towards her across the
open ground. Florina gave a small smile and waved.
“You have good timing, Ninian. I need to thank you.” Florina
gestured to the ripped leather under her hand. “If it hadn’t been for you, this
would have been in me or Huey instead of just my saddle.”
“Oh!” Ninian put her hand to her chest, as if she was
surprised. “But…that isn’t right….”
“Huh?” Florina put down her needle. “What do you mean? I
never would have seen that assassin in the dark like that…it was only you
sensing danger that let me get out of the way.” Florina smiled again. She had
taken it upon herself to protect the dancer on the battlefield, but it had
worked out the other way – Ninian had ended up saving her countless times and
Florina had done little other than keep her company. “You really are amazing,
you know?”
“No…” said Ninian. “I mean, I came to thank you.” She dipped into a quick half bow.
Sunlight glinted off her pale hair in the same way it did off the snowy fields
of Ilia. “You’re so kind, and so strong too. You’ve made me feel stronger than
I was before. I want to protect people important to me too, like you do. I want
to protect Nils, Lord Eliwood and his friends….and you too, Miss Florina.”
Ninian straightened up, and she was smiling, but it didn’t
reach her eyes. In fact, despite the smile, she seemed more melancholy than
usual.
“What’s wrong, Ninian?” Florina asked. “Is something going
to happen?”
Instead of answering, Ninian looked up, studying the
cloud-studded sky with an intensity that it didn’t deserve. “I wish….I wish I
could have been on the mountain to meet you that night, Miss Florina. Maybe
things would have been different. I would have liked that.” She turned then,
and hurried away.
“Ninian, wait!” Florina tried to stand as well, but was
burdened by the cumbersome saddle. By the time she set it aside and stood up,
Ninian had vanished among the hastily set-up tents of their makeshift camp.
Florina stared after her. She wasn’t a seer like Ninian, but she couldn’t shake
the feeling that something terrible would happen at their next battle. “I won’t
let it,” she said quietly to herself. “No matter what…I’ll do my best to
protect you.”
Well we all know that fanfiction is not really my wheelhouse but I’m willing to try to do some microfictions today if you send me a Fire Emblem pairing to my asks.
(Stick with Blazing Sword, Tellius, or Awakening because those are the ones I know well enough)
4: Do you have an writing habits/rituals?
I don’t think so? The only thing I do is that every time I start a new draft I open a blank document and type it all from scratch again. But I don’t know if that actually counts!
6: Favorite character you’ve written?
RETTA. I have an emotional connection to all the girls in Laero but Retta is definitely the most fun I’ve ever had writing a character. I’m sad I have to take out most of her scenes because reasons, but that just means I get a chance to write some new ones.
52: Who do you write for?
All the young, frustrated girls who maybe don’t know who they are or who they like or what they want to do but know that it isn’t that, ‘that’ being what is usually seen in books about girls. For all the young girls questioning their sexuality, especially the asexual ones. For the young girl that I used to be (and still am sometimes).
And also out of the hope that maybe, just maybe, my books will have a positive emotional impact on someone, and that it can be the thing they need at the time they need it. (was that sappy enough, or what?)
53: First line of my WIP.
The first sentence of my current WIP is pretty short so here’s the first few (I think it’s too abrupt an opening but it works for now).
“Tajcie
is a city full of temples. Every temple has a god, every god has a feast, a
festival, or a celebration. And yet, in the city the gods love best, no event
is anticipated more eagerly than the King’s Horse Fair.
“
1. Tell us about your WIP!
2. Where is your favorite place to write?
3. What is your favorite/least favorite part about writing?
4. Do you have any writing habits/rituals?
5. Top five formative books?
6. Favorite character you’ve written?
7. Favorite/most inspirational book?
8. Do you have any writing buddies or critique partners?
9. Favorite/least favorite tropes?
10. Pick an author (or writing friend) to co-write a book with
11. What are you planning to work on next?
12. Which story of yours do you like best? why?
13. Describe your writing process
14. What does it take for you to be ready to write a book? (i.e. do you research? outline? make a playlist or pinterest board? wing it?)
15. How do you deal with self-doubt when writing?
16. Cover love/dream covers?
17. What things (scenes/topics/character types) are you most comfortable writing?
18. Tell us about that one book you’ll never let anyone read
19. How do you cope with writer’s block?
20. Any advice for young writers/advice you wish someone would have given you early on?
21. What aspect of your writing are you most proud of?
22. Tell us about the books on your “to write” list
23. Most anticipated upcoming books?
24. Do you remember the moment you decided to become a writer/author?
25. What’s your worldbuilding process like?
26. What’s the most research you’ve ever put into a book?
27. Every writer’s least favorite question – where does your inspiration come from? Do you do certain things to make yourself more inspired? Is it easy for you to come up with story ideas?
28. How do you stay focused on your own work and how do you deal with comparison?
29. Is writing more of a hobby or do you write with the intention of getting published?
30. Do you like to read books similar to your project while you’re drafting or do you stick to non-fiction/un-similar works?
31. Top five favorite books in your genre?
32. On average how much do you write in a day? do you have trouble staying focused/getting the word count in?
33. What’s your revision/rewriting process like?
34. Unpopular writing thoughts/opinions?
35. Post the last sentence you wrote
36. Post a snippet
37. Do you ever write long handed or do you prefer to type everything?
38. How do you nail voice in your books?
39. Do you spend a lot of time analyzing and studying the work of authors you admire?
40. Do you look up to any of your writer buddies?
41. Are there any books you feel have shaped you as a writer?
42. How many drafts do you usually write before you feel satisfied?
43. How do you deal with rejection?
44. Why (and when) did you decide to become a writer?
45. First or third person?
46. Past or present tense?
47. Single or dual/multi POV?
48. Do you prefer to write skimpy drafts and flesh them out later, or write too much and cut it back?
49. Favorite fictional world?
50. Do you share your rough drafts or do you wait until everything is all polished?
51. Are you a secretive writer or do you talk with your friends about your books?
52. Who do you write for?
53. What is the first line of your WIP?
54. Favorite first line/opening you’ve written?
55. How do you manage your time/make time for writing? (do you set aside time to write every day or do you only write when you have a lot of free time?)
Here is the complete directory to my Femslash February novella, a vague and extremely gay retelling of the fairy tale “The Girl Who Pretended to be a Boy”. It’s 21,875 words altogether.
When King Lyov decides to declare himself emperor, he issues an ultimatum to all the other kingdoms. Any place that sends him a prince as tribute will be allowed to surrender. Any country that doesn’t will be taken by force.
The kingdom of Murane has no princes to send, and so each of its three princesses takes a turn at trying to fool the emperor. Temitope quickly learns that it’s far more dangerous than she ever imagined – and it’s going to take everything she has to get out of it alive.
Part One (1,944 words)
Part Two (1,630 words)
Part Three (1,559 words)
Part Four (1,198 words)
Part Five (1,415 words)
Part Six (1,514 words)
Part Seven (1,282 words)
Part Eight (1,333 words)
Part Nine (1,469 words)
Part Ten (1,362 words)
Part Eleven (1,147 words)
Part Twelve (1,510 words)
Part Thirteen (1,517 words)
Part Fourteen (1,917 words)
Part Fifteen (1,072 words)
It’s complete and it’s all here! Wow, what a project!
I’ve written plenty of things before but I think I still learned a lot from this. I hope you guys enjoy it!
The fourteenth installment of my Femslash February novel! Once again, please keep in mind that this is a 1st draft and is a little rough around the edges. 1,917 words. First part is here.
I think one more and we should be done. 🙂
This year for Femslash February I decided I would write a novel, and I’m putting it up here bit-by-bit in all it’s unedited, 1st draft glory (please don’t laugh too much).
It’s vaguely based on an obscure fairy tale I discovered a few month ago titled “The Girl who Pretended to be a Boy” and is going to feature cute princesses, cross-dressing, adventure, revenge, and a guaranteed gay happily ever after.
If you’re interested, the first installment is below the cut!
IT BEGINS.